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December 29, 2012
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A child's finger drags
through wet sand inspired by
a coy ocean muse,
and finds future in sand dollars --
with no thought of that
treasure chest full of riches.
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We all have dreams as children, and they are always clouded by money.. We can't dream if money gets in the way. Yet we don't realize that money needn't provide that fulfilling life many of us wish to enjoy through doing what we dream to do.

A live reading of the poem: [link]

This is an extended haiku.
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~eabhaciar Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice
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~Wanderlings Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
This is a lovely insightful poem! I would suggest also submitting it to the group #TheHeartOfAChild: [link]

I think it might fit there :) It's an awesome piece!!
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~10kdays Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this; it has a nice ring to it. Short, simple, effective
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~10kdays Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)it's nice to find fellow writers on here
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